PastryMan's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[-The Woods-]

Well...

It wasn't bad. It was rather enjoyable. Just, the story was honeslty kind of weak. Ok, so we have a boy and he decides to randomly chase this rabbit. Oddly enough, he chases this rabbit for like a half hour into the dark creepy woods. Surprise, theres a wolf. What does the boy do? Well, chase the rabbit, ofcourse! Turns out that the rabbit is like jesus or something (I know thats not what you were going for but with the bright lights and such it feels that way) and it leads the lost little boy to safety.

Dont get me wrong, though. It was a great submission and I think you should be proud, but next time try to make things make a bit more sense and not so cliche. You certainly have potential, your a good animator, just not a writer...yet.

Keep it up, I hope to see more from you.

element-2 responds:

there was no script. i animated to the music. i get bored when i write out stories and animate to them. i'm not much of an animator. i see and understand how i want something to look. this is more focused on how the picture goes with the music, rather than how you think the character is feeling. so thanks for the reveiw.

[BOB episode 1]

Nice, but needs work

I liked the new artistic style. When you said that it has an original style I was thinking "Pff, another noob who thinks demons and flames havn't been done," I was wrong. One thing that kept me out of the experience, though, was the quality of the sounds and music, and the mediocre voic acting. It wasn't all too funny either. Overall its a good fun series that I'd like to see more of, but a bit of work would go a long way. Good luck :D

thrakish responds:

thank you very much. im currently working on an episode 2, and i have taken all acount into cleaning up the animation a bit, as well as my sound. ESPECIALLY my sound.